Tuesday, February 8, 2011

poem

You’re real cool? You
Left school or school
Left you.  You

Lurk late. You
Obey another or you
Really strike straight. You

Enjoy sin.  Or your
Thin gin sings sin. You

Jazz June.  Or you
Don’t remember it. You
Naïve you are dying

3 comments:

  1. Carlos,

    I love how you turned the beginning of this poem into a question! It makes a very ominous beginning, and it has quite a different effect that Brooks' poem.

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  2. Check out Hal's Blog. He gave the wrong address in class, but the right one is below:

    http://qinhaoing.blogspot.com/

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  3. This poem take a more personal way because it's like asking to you about your thinking. It's very interesting.

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